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by DeadlyDanielle
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Anonymousalmost 7 years agoMeh.
It was an interesting concept, but the narrative tone of the story didn't grab me at all.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoGreat premise, horrible writing
Sorry, Kiddo. Your grammar stinks and your abuse of ellipses is cringe-worthy. You need an editor. I read through the very distracting errors anyway because I honestly thought it was a decent story. Please keep writing.
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