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All Comments on 'The Start Of Something New'

by RoxanneMillan

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DeverillDeverillover 13 years ago
Hmm

Nice story, but you need a ruthless editor to comb through it. In particular, it would be more attractive to read about mel's hands around her 'waist' than around her 'waste'.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Wow...

I'm liking this... just so many ways!! :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Very good start.

Great story, I hope to read more of it soon.

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