All Comments on 'The Start Pt. 01'

This is just a repost of the same story from March 2015 using a different name ID.

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-start-pt-01

Why not say so?

What is the point?

Repost or not let's be honest I am sure it's safe to say people read these stories to get turned on and sometimes to get off. There are those actually provide that with one page. This submission did NOT! *

Repost of existing teaser, waste of fucking time!

What kind of writer uses nothing but run-on sentences? My guess is one who is too immature to consider that his readers might want to understand what he is trying to say. Sometimes, shorter sentences are easier for the reader.

I know that I sometimes write long sentences. But if I can say the same thing without the excess verbiage then my readers will benefit. I urge you to stop. Unlike the readers that have criticized you for recycling a story, I could care less. But I want to understand what you are saying.

If this is part 1, there doesn't need to be a part 2. You have no idea what punctuation is and how to use it. You should get some middle school level (about 8th grade) English Grammer and Composition books and study. Also, this is not really a story of anything that has, or is likely to ever happen. If this is stolen from another author, you should not post another story - ever. I usually have a problem with Father/Daughter stories because those relationships (in my experience) lean toward intimidation by the Father in some form. I really have nothing good to say here. Run-on sentence after Run-on sentence and you never seem to figure it out. Why would anyone write anything and publish it or post it to be read by the public without a proofreader is beyond me. I think you really need to find another hobby. Try masturbation therapy, the equipment is inexpensive and takes up very little space.

Fuck annony, it has no idea what a good story really is. I gave you a 5

Hi with ref to comments regarding the posting of "The start part 1 ",my username used to be Sallysdad_uk reason and the reason I altered it to Sallysdaduk was because owing to me altering my E mail address in a profile edit for some reason I couldn't sign in,so the stories I am reposting are the ones I posted as Sallysdad_uk.Have posted Part 1 ,another 6 to follow,hope this does away with the idea I am copying them ,posted them all originally as Sallysdad_uk .

Thank you.. Sallysdaduk

I think this has loads of potential. It's developing nicely, certainly not worth the crap being thrown at it by those brave anonymous commentators!