by HappyWife85
You are obviously oblivious to good, solid, and imaginative writing.
I don't care what the other people have said - I liked this story, and I felt it could give a sturdy basis for a multi-chapter story. I'll be keeping posted and look forward to the next installment. :-)
Pretty soon you will all be in cuckold marriages... get used to it!
I love the vivid descriptiveness of this piece.
@the 1 star asshole: too much time on your hands?