All Comments on 'The Storm'

Really well done story. You are a terrific writer, and this was very erotic. You did a great set-up with it, were patient with the characters, made sure it was damned hot when the humping started. So much better than most of the things I see on this site. Just outstanding!

Very good, I am awaiting more of the same, thank you for taking the time to write it

I enjoyed this story as well as your other work here.

You talk about how they continue their new relationship and also mentioned an older sister. Is there room for her to become involved in some way? Either sister/sister or all three together.

Write another chapter i m waiting for it love it as all other of your posts .

No tasting of her sweet juices for the first time, no lingering over the tits he'd wondered about since she grew them?

Omg, That was so hot!!! made my pussy so wet just reading it. amazing

CONTINUE..IWOULD LIKE TO MAKE 5/18/12 WET TOO

If she is riding him why is she saying harder, HARDER!

she is doing the work if she is on top

A beautiful story... Write more!