All Comments on 'The Story of a Cyclist'

The story is good, but the typos and wrong words are distracting: breast for breasts, slid for slit, braking for breaking, fulfil for fulfill, tick for thick, dessert for desert

— and that is just from the second webpage. As I said, these things distract readers from the story.

Thanks for a nicely written story, good storyline...looking forward to the next part.

Thank you for the feedback. I might have been a bit quick reading over it plus English is not my first language too. Just edited the story to eliminate the spelling mistakes as much as I could. Will submit it to Lit and hope it will be up soon.