All Comments on 'The Story of N Day 04-05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Dude - Sci/fi

This was just silly

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
still loving it!

Hope the wife keeps him locked up when she returns! Cool story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Great story I just cannot get enough can't wait for the next one

roftlheoryroftlheoryabout 8 years ago
Sexy

This is a very erotic chapter, I like how descriptive you are and how you show your creative side with all these various sexual acts. At some points it feels a little hurried as you mention a lot of different things at the same time but it works for this type of story. Thanks for the great read ^^

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Day 6?

I really like your chapters so far! I'm a little worried, though, on how you'll make this stretch to 30 days. I really do enjoy it a lot. It has a ton of good concepts, with plenty of goodies thrown in. Can't wait for day 6-30!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

It's one thing to be dominated by a female, the humiliation aspect is something I find incredibly stupid and offensive. This series started out having an okay premise then it just went off the deep end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Well it seems he needs to short circuit the interface

And plug the AI into a wall socket and watch it melt. Dumb.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Assertive and amazing

N is an amazing character—I'm not into cum in the slightest and am sort of grossed out by it, but I'm still in love with N, whose strong-willed ways are an incredible turn-on.

Does she have a more sensitive side? I think I'd like to see her develop a nurturing, almost electra-complex side toward our hapless hero. Where she might lecture him and spank him and let more of her classy personality show.

Or even push him into some roleplaying with her in roles like bubbly high school girl (who—oopsie!—keeps having "accidents" that put our hero in awkward spots... jeepers, did I do that?)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
To that one Anon

He doesn't want to get rid of her tho. He agreed to this, as well as his fiancee. The robot is doing what the guy and his wife want it to do. It isn't a rogue robot... Yet.

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