All Comments on 'The Story of Qiu Lian Pt. 01'

Well written and intriguing. The level of detail is commendable but just a small reduction in it would enhance the flow.

It reads as if this is a first section of a larger story, if so, I look forward to further installments. This story would probably be very welcome if you posted it at utopia stories dot com (join the first two words together)

Amazing detail, amazing story so far, and I can't wait to read the other chapters!

5/5 from me, thank you.

I surely do hope there's a Part 2!

I loved this story and I would like to encourage you to continue. These things are a lot of work, so I just want to say that your effort is totally appreciated. I love your writing and I love your character, Qiu.

After reading these chapters, I believe that Qiu will have some trying times coming up, but her personality seems to be someone who will survive whatever hardships may befall her. For me, that is a magical combination that makes the tale intriguing and memorable.

Thanks for you effort!

--subGrrl

My... It's been a long time since I found a good an thrilling story here. I really encourage you to continue this amazing story.

I'd love to know if there ever was a part 2 to this story.

Wrote this story years ago and never finished it. Now he has started something new and there's no need to finish it because the start was so bad nobody wants to read anymore. UGH!