by Peckersnot
I liked it, it reads easily enough, the erotica is hot and the concept has a lot of milage even if it is a little jokey. Keep up the good work :)
5/5 stars
Thank you all for your kind words, and for your interest and encouragement. (This is my first attempt at writing erotica, or much of anything, for that matter.)
I am working on a second installment of this story now, and hope to submit it for publication in another week or so.