All Comments on 'The Story to End All Stories'

Not bad but the little inconsistencies that didnt need to be in there kind of hurt this. At first hes afraid about knocking someone up then theres a bb gun accident. Lame. Should have just knocked them all up and be done with it since youre being so over the top.

Great first story on this site. There were a few grammatical errors but not bad. Thanks, hope to see more from you.

Completely unbelievable. But it's your story. Tell it any way you want.

TBC

In an abnormal kind of way.

wonder how his dick survived all that pussy.

Hope to see more in the near future. Thanks

...in high school, he has far more skills than he should have.

Transitions non-existent which made for a jumpy read. Sex rushed and premise unbelievable.

He said his mom was approaching her 40th birthday, assuming he was at least 17, his mom had him at age 12. Really???

To mr anon,

If the mom is nearing 40, and assuming the charactor is 17, then she would have had him at age 21-22, not 12. That would make her 30.

I gave up about half way - being completely satiated of women who lose their mind (and bodies) just by seeing - or even just by hearing about - a large dick.

Too much fucking and too little real people, relations and emotions.

And dicks pulled out of someone's ass and then put directly into somebody's mouth is such an extremely unhealthy and dangerous practice that if the rest of the story should unlikely have left you with some spark still, encountering this practice in the text make you go immediately limp.

Mom shouldn't​ be to mad at her husband, she was fucking plenty of people.

I know this story is old, but in case the author ever sees this. It's almost ALWAYS better show show and not tell. Use dialog! For god's fucking sake.