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All Comments on 'The Strangeness Within Pt. 03'

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SisterRobinSisterRobinover 6 years ago
Excellent work.

Your characters are intriguing and the plot is moving along well.

5 stars...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Tough

That's life I guess. It was harder for me to read, after they separated, but your story is definitely interesting and well written. I think I might have had an easier time with the new people and relationship changes if it were novel length, but that's not really a criticism, I eventually got over it. Well done!

rockchaserrockchaserover 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comments!

The editing and revising is going slower than expected (of course), but eventually I'll get all the parts up. And the overall story is definitely novel length, for good or bad :)

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Teenagers and sex. What could be simpler or more complex? Somehow the characters feel real. Great writing!

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Update [12/30/2019]: Life intervened, and my writing slowed to a crawl. But things are picking up again. Finishing up a few shorter stories, and I'll upload them in the next week. Larger projects proceeding apace, but not near completion: * third book in "The Strangeness Withi...