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All Comments on 'The Strangeness Within Pt. 04'

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2027fred2027fredover 6 years ago
This was great as usual

Great work please continue I love how you snuck in the xeyes thing I would have spat out my drink if a had one please continue writing this it is amazing

Fred

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 6 years ago
The magic isn't there when our protagonists are apart.

I know the separation is necessary to move the plot along but I'm just reading to get to their reunion, not because it's enjoyable. I hope it returns to the quality of the first chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Same here

I also thought the story was better when Javier & Ester were together. I’m kind of hanging on for their reunion.

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Update [12/30/2019]: Life intervened, and my writing slowed to a crawl. But things are picking up again. Finishing up a few shorter stories, and I'll upload them in the next week. Larger projects proceeding apace, but not near completion: * third book in "The Strangeness Withi...