All Comments on 'The Stranger'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Interesting start

I liked the realistic bar fight. At least you didn't do as some writers would do and have Kurt single-handedly wipe out all three guys. I enjoy the mystery surrounding Kurt and look forward to the personal attraction and sexual buildup of the story. You have me interested in both characters.

dreamdrakadreamdrakaover 11 years ago
nice

I like the story so far, but I wish the first chapter was a little longer.

darkravenwolfdarkravenwolfover 10 years ago
nice beginning

Would love to know how it goes between them

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Nice beginning! Looking forward to see where it goes

darkravenwolfdarkravenwolfover 5 years ago
Love it.

I would love to know what happens next. Great start can't wait for more.

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