by Bravesfan101
....it never ceases to amaze me that so many think an 11" cock the diameter of a Foster's Lager is the apex of female sexual bliss.
Of course in this story, she changed the game mid-stream and now she's a giant cock slut and is probably preggers with the bull's baby. In any event, he got far more than he bargained for and likely lost his marriage. Beyond the story, your writing was OK.....not great.
Not much room here for characterization, so we couldn't come to like any character. Not much content or back story, just enough to establish that he wants to watch her suck a big cock and she agrees to "do it for him". Then, after the bull gets her off several times orally (also not in the plan, if I recall), she decides she "owes" him and invites him to fuck her. And that is where this little piece spun off the trail and into the tall grass. Consequences.
Oh, too bad for cuck boy.
No. Thank. You.
This story, could be included in the category: "beware what you wish for"!!! But to be a good one itΒ΄s missing what the husband feelings were (why did he used a rubber? was it normal? By her reaction it wasn't...) through all that happened and most important is missing the aftermath: how both of them dealt with what happen and what consequences all that brough to their married life...Like this it's too incomplete...1*
easy enough to get a divorce with her pregnant by another man, funny all the cuck gone wrong stories, a few pictures used later as evidence works, even a tape recording you begging your wife not to fuck the other guy works
Finnish the damn story, going by ending it would seem end of marriage and to tell the truth it's obviously the end of this marriage.
I think the writer had a story in mind but failed to deliver it to paper.....not going to rate
...about STDs? Because OMG, 999 out of every 1000 people have STDs that are 100% fatal. The poor couple in this story are doomed to a long painful death....according to impo_61.
Vote 1* for every story rated by πππ π ππ πππππ (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka ANON!
The story isn't complete. It needs closure. What will he do? What will she do?
This is a good set up for follow-up stories of awaking sexual exploits of a married couple. Initially getting past the sex scene. Slow it down build more background up we need to get to know the characters better to feel the emotion in the relationships. We don't know if the husband just likes to watch or likes the humiliation, was this his true dream or the start of a nightmare.
Serves the stupid bastard right, play with fire, it spreads and u get burnt
She lets herself get fucked because of a big dick how funny. Her husband is yelling at her it wasn't part of the deal. She must be really a dog if she couldn't stop. Best thing for the husband to do is if all else fails is to hit him with a chair that would of got both of their attention
I will hold off rating; to se where the story goes...
Maybe it will be pulled out of the gutter?
have her get a day after pill. Then she can continue to have extra-marital sex without slowing down to have a baby and complicate or destroy her marriage.
Well this wasn't all that bad, for a first chapter. You definitely left the ending hanging. So will be looking forward to the next part..
I don't think this fag will have a wife much longer.sad.
Not all that great and a over-used plot 2* and I can live without any further chapters
...come to a porn site and complain about fictional stories. I have a feeling it really only one sad little will of a guy who thought he could handle his wife fucking others and when she actually got a taste of a real man, she left his tiny-dicked self for the other guy. Now he spends his life posting negative comments on porn sites and any story involving wife sharing. I guess he doesn't know just how much of a sad little puke he truly is. Go die already.
Short and sweet, just like I would be, watching a big cock stud pound my wife. I have done much the same thing but our stud only had 9" Now I really feel short-changed!
My wife was similar, wanting to please me and not have anything to do with the studs selection. Watching her and playing with her while she was being fucked, hard, was the most erotic thing of my life. This story brings back happy memories and for those of you that think it collapsed our marriage you will be disappointed because we are still together 25 years after this and many more sexy moments. Life is for living and if you do nothing exciting in life you may as well read these stories and complain. It really does bring a smile to my face thinking about the experience - thanks.
I think this is a great start for a series.
The stranger passed his number to her and she calls him.
She decides to find her own man.
She decides two or more can do the job.
What woman would turn down a cock that size she couldn't get it all in her mouth so she knew where it would fit, sorry for the cuckold he set it up and couldn't see the wood for the trees he should get his brains out of his cock end.
Now she has sampled a big cock, there will stopping her looking for more.
Puzzled why if she only supposed just to suck why did tell her not to put knickers on?
The story,and the marriage were over when Cucky just left her lying there and went up to bed without her. He started the breaking of marriage vows and,she finished it. No way the newly minted Size Queen will ever be happy with Cucky's mediocrity again. She'll cheat for BIG meat!