All Comments on 'The Stranger'

I kinda suspected the twist, but definitely NOT that the couple was THOSE two! What a happy surprise!

Thanks for sharing your storytelling skill with us again. This is a great story, handled beautifully.

The twist was suspected but to know who they were was a bonus.

Loved reading another one of your stories! Here's to hoping for many more!

Yes, welcome back! As I was reading the first page I thought "this is a really good writer... the pacing... the dialogue." 5 stars.

Well told and well conceived story, but I was disappointed that it was Andrew cheating on Gina. Something special about those two.

Maybe, just maybe, that was Gina sneaking off for a role playing tryst with Andrew. Yeah, I think that's it. Clever!

I enjoyed the story - well structured, good dialogue, etc. Then, I reached the ending - WOW !

I re-read the story with the surprise conclusion in mind, and enjoyed it even more. This is totally a five-star endeavor!

Thank god you are back and with a bang! I read the story just like I would do with any other piece of work, but the ending changed everything. It's sad to see Andrew cheating on Gina and I hated it. But you are their creator and of course and without a doubt you will do justice to their part. Also, Yay! You are back.

A true loving wife story congrats and 5 well earned stars for you! Now, 5 kids, they need parents closer, or an Au Pair. Earning a living and kids are a major stress on a marriage, (lived it).

But really, they could use some counseling. It should be a warning that it takes fucking a stranger to rediscover their lust and passion.

I urge you, read between the lines.

You were missed. And your story is excellent!

I had to read it twice to figure out what was really going on, but the clues are there. Well done!

...and I don't even care. This was beautifully written, from an emotional as well as sexual viewpoint. You're one of my favorite writers on this site and you'll always get five starts from me.

The story really bugged me the first time I read it, then about two weeks later I figured out the twist. Wonderful!

Didn't see it coming. Great little twist at the end. Terrific writing. Loved the give and take in the bedroom. A very fun story to read. Easily a 5. 😊😊😊😊😊

Nice twist at the end. And for the people that left a negative comment about how he shouldn't be cheating, you need to re-read the story and pay more attention to the ending - you missed the clever part. I hate cheaters too, but there's nothing to hate about this tale.

Great story and your writing was impeccable, as usual. Thanks for posting.

Any LW author who is so prissy that they have to use euphemisms for genitals needs a writing seminar, at least. What's with, tool, or member? This was supposed to be erotica.

And what's with the frequent employment of condoms with spouses? Doesn't British health provide pills these days? On the other hand, why the fantasy of no birth control and making believe that pulling out before cumming will suffice? Make believe is one thing, but perpetuating false information to LW readers is morally irresponsible.

The first time I read your story I had a hunch it was his wife, after the second meeting. I never would have guessed who the man and wife were. Even though I guessed right the first read, it amazed me how many subtle things I missed the first time through. When I read it the second time, it was like going from black, and white, to technicolor. So many little things jumped out at me, and made it such an inventive,enjoyable story. Great job.

Great, so different

Wow! Absolutely wow! What a great twist and what a great story. Well developed and beautifully written. 5*s.

5 Stars and a wonderful well written loving wives story for a change. Please write more like this one.

well told. figured it was really his wife early on and they were just setting up a sexy scene.

A good author with a good story.

Very well written, just not my cup of tea!

Great story, and beautifully written, too. Had me fooled ‘til the end, wondering why he wasn’t feeling a little guilty. Thanks for a great read.

I liked it.

The ending was so predictable that it made the read tedious. Might have worked better if it was more than a two character play and had a chance to disguise the ending.