by neha_d_angel
This is an excellent start and I would like to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing.
RecHiker
Excellent build up to a great story. Wish you never would stop. Please give a little more details to the look and attire of the main protagonist, like very high heels, sexy anklets on one ankle,extremely low waist sari with complete backless blouse on one occasion,maybe get a tattoo or a piercing.....make her a true slut as she is....go on and on with your wonderful narration. Given 5 stars to all installments. I am hooked on to your writing. Don't make us wait a lot on every installments though.
Nice and hot writing. Please write more. I like the way she give her self just for thought not even seeing the person. keep writing.
This story is so realistic, at times it does give the goosebumps.
Would love to read the rest of it!
Don't leave us all frustrated like this. I can't wait to find out who this guy is. I thought it was going to be the girl actually. This story is like bad sex................. it left me feeling frustrated. lol