All Comments on 'The Stud Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Non-realistic

Pussy writtttter - a jock taking this - get real - can't sell it - no way - but it must be your wish so i assume you would be demure and a panty waist - that would make you cume along just fine - nice try but not erotic - just sick brutal shit - male or female - either way

Find something else to write about that's remotely believeable and a little erotic - not sick

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
good story

Great Story, don't mind the previous reader. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Unrealistic

Suuure, big strong football player runs and sees two women standing in his way with hands on their hips and does not run through them? Ridiculous.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
5 Star!

You have no idea how long I spent reading through the 'non-consent/reluctance' page to find something where the women were in control. This was awesome. There's nothing unrealistic about women dominating men and you're story was very believable, as the character was too weak with fear to barge past Stephanie and Desiane.

I can't wait until you post the next one. Great job!

equals1000wordsequals1000wordsalmost 15 years ago
"The Stud" is def. NOT a dud

femdom is so hot --rare, unconventional, erotic.

love hearing about women using men, taking advantage, treating them as studs. yumyumyum.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Baloney

The very first time in the room with the two of them? She pins his arms? I don't think so. Even if she was fairly strong he would have gotten loose, even if he had to stomp on her foot. The rest is totally unbelievable. And what, they're going to keep him forever? Or kill him? In the end, when he gets loose, they're going to jail for a long, long time or worse. You treat people like animals and they respond in kind. Revenge can be deadly. Weak sauce.

Nephlim14Nephlim14over 8 years ago
Part 3 Please

Please make a sequel where he finally escapes.

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