All Comments on 'The Student Body Pt. 01'

But the teacher seems more like a bully, rather than a teacher

Don't often agree with Jenorma, but we are on the same page here. The teacher is a bully, not a seductress. There is no seduction, no tempting, no turning. And even in 'porn world', this story requires a lot of suspension of disbelief. Plus it wandered too much. There is no discernible order it. I very much like your premise; a predatory lesbian teacher, in a target rich environment of an all girls school. But there is much work to be done on this story. Not to mention the ridiculousness of a school full of naive innocent 18 year olds. A couple maybe, but even 18 year old virgins know how things work. The story would work better on the storiesonline site, where they don't pretend teens under 18 don't have sex, and.in fact is legal at 16 or 17 in most states. Nice idea, but you need.practice, practice, practice.

I couldn't disagree more with the previous comments. This is a fantasy world clearly. I found the teavher's aggressiveness a turn on. This is a well done story. It's not the absolute best I've read but it's way above average. I hope it continues.

Isn't that exactly the fears of homophobes, of predator teachers out to turn their children, that is not nature but because they are coerced?

I love it will there be more

The panty trade is super exciting, I also liked the exhibitionism. It has some minor flaws, but overall it's a good story. Too bad there's no sequel. The writer is talented, he could correct the mistakes.

Without the spelling errors, would have been 5.