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Click hereSuddenly the dam inside him gave a monstrous crack, and he quickly pulled her face away from his cock, ready to go.
And in the darkness, both of them froze solid, realizing at the same time that it was going to be messy if he let it go right there.
Maddy laughed; he felt the warm breeze across his cock and almost blew. "Sorry," she whispered, jumping the hell out of him as her hand clutched his dick. "I'm not going to swallow it, so I guess-"
And she didn't elaborate, but leaned her body against him and began to jerk him off fiercely against her breasts, until the dam gave out, his cock convulsed hard, and in the darkness he suddenly blew his load all over her chest - just like a fucking porn star! he thought in a frenzy of ecstasy. Something about it must have shocked her, she let out a little, "Oh!" as it spurted onto her, god knew how much of it actually hitting her, and how much they were going to be scrubbing up in four or five hours when the sun rose. He grunted and writhed in her grip, and just like a movie, she was holding it against her tit, sliding it around in the slippery mess he made on her skin, and he ejaculated five or six good spurts on her before it died away.
"That... was messy," she whispered, and he thought by the sound of her voice that if he could see his wife just then, he'd be looking at a very red face.
"I don't know what else we could have done at that point," he said, laughing at the two of them, standing in their hallway like a teenage couple in a movie theater, trying to figure out what they were supposed to do now.
"I know," she answered - was she laughing too? Maddy?
"I hope you aren't too... offended- or anything," he said.
"Don't worry," she said.
"Are you sure?"
"It's not something I want to do every night," she whispered. "But tonight- was a dirty night. It was dirty, and I liked it."
"I didn't think you had any dirtiness in you."
"Not much," she assured him, still lightly rubbing his dick while it softened in her grip. "But enough for this time."
And just like that, the hottest, most erotic ten minutes of both of their lives was over, and there had been almost nothing to it. It wouldn't have made much of a movie, anyway. But Nick had never guessed there would come a day when he would hear his sweet little Maddy, groaning with effort as she slowly rose back to her feet in the dark, burst into giggles and whisper, "Okay, hot stuff. Now I've got to go downstairs and wash your come off my tits."
"That was- wow, god, thank you," he told her.
One of her hands, sticky with his seed, faintly touched his chest, and she whispered, "Tomorrow... I want to talk about this. And about- well... About this kind of stuff."
She slipped away down the stairs, and Nick, smiling again like a schoolboy, called after her, "You'll have my full attention."
That, it would turn out, was exactly what they both needed.
7.
By the time she made it back, Nick had gathered their clothes and slipped back into the bedroom. He handed her the shirt she'd been sleeping in, and she shook her head when he offered her the dark green panties, so he tossed them down at the foot of the bed, hugged her, and kissed her forehead.
"That must have been one hot dream," he said quietly.
"It was an awful dream," she answered. "But I can't help what I dream about, and at least we got something good out of it."
"It couldn't have been all bad," he remarked, his curiosity instantly piqued.
"I don't even want to think about it right now," she said. "I need some sleep."
So he kissed her again, and they crawled back into bed, exhausted but satisfied.
And then, over the little lump of Danny between them, Nick told his wife, "I hope this isn't because we were arguing last night. I'm sorry about that."
And Maddy, who wasn't sure if that was what it was about or not, simply said, "It's okay. I love you."
- COMMENTS
reddogs88almost 12 years agoI enjoyed this story. Good to read one where husband and wife still want each other, even after fighting and having a stale sex life for a couple of years. The adventures can only get better from here.
norcal62about 12 years agoHad to comment to upgrade my first impression of the story up to a 5. I can imagine a couple of limited communication skills in exactly this situation.
Good construction, even though a little hard to follow in places.
DWornockalmost 13 years agoSo I quit reading and gave it a 1.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoI've read a few of the comments of this story and am a bit confused, merely for the fact that I have no idea what harry's comment was. I can't really see what the issue was here.
Firstly, this is a story. So in term of that, I felt it to be well written and a great read.
Secondly, and I feel there are many who miss this point, these are works of fiction. They are not meant to be 100% accurate. Accuracy helps if the author wishes to make a particular point, but it is by no means neccessary.
And lastly, Although I do enjoy this section of fiction, it is most defeinattly refreshing for the wife to actually be cheating. I don't think every unhappy relationship has to go that way and there are many people in this world who uphold their morals and vulues. The fact that I enjoy these stories doesn't imply that I will ever cheat, or that I wil ruin my partner if she does, nor that I will take her back (or expect her to take me back). These completely depend on the circumstances and on the people and concidering thar Litroitica Auther's attempt to give such combinations of circumstance, they, by poetic licince have the right to set their (the sories) path any which way they choose.
But he most important point is this: I enjoyed this story. (and on an entirely coincidental note thought it was very plausable)
bruce22almost 16 years agoI was furious with the wife about half-way through the
story. She deserved what ever disaster was around the corner(obivously)...
Then after all the discussion here I find myself rooting for the future of the couple and almost feeling compassion for her.
Now that is real fine work, Author.
MILFEDalmost 16 years agosome of the best writing I have seen here. Some may not like the people in the story and what is going on with them but hey, that is how real life is.
RMRedfallalmost 16 years agoAuthor<h5>@Harry</h5>
<p>Now you have given me the kind of input I'm hoping for. You have a pet peeve as a reader, and it's more than just "valid", it's actually, as an earlier comment described you, very "on point". My goal with this storyline is, in fact, to resolve the issues facing Nick and Maddy, and I hope to do so in such a way that we are all, myself wholly included, satisfied with the future of their marriage. I have set forth with this first story to reveal something of a hidden scar, and I thought (though I could be wrong - it's hard to gauge your own success) that I had done so in such a way as to leave you anticipating the conversation which takes place soon after this encounter.</p>
<p>At the same time, I hope all readers give me some credit which I haven't fully earned yet: I know why we're all here. Philosophy and moral dilemma are all well and good, but please have faith that this story is <b>not</b> the extent of my ability as a writer of <i>erotica</i>. Like an appetizer, I hope this story "tastes good", but I know that it doesn't satisfy like a meal.</p>
<p>And to the anonymous poster who says:</p>
<p><b style="color:#000088;">Great story. I was able to identify with the emotions of both characters, and I feel like it may give me a little insight into my own marriage.</b></p>
<p>If that's true, then you have paid me what I consider the greatest of all compliments: you've just told me that I accomplished what I set out to accomplish, though to my own eyes I think I've presented a shiny coin with a bit of rust on it. I am thoroughly flattered and very appreciative of the word "insight" making its appearance here. If I had to sum up my goals as a writer of fiction, I believe that one word says it all. I hope that I can live up to its definition.</p>
<p>Now then. I have some writing to do. XD</p>
Harryin VAalmost 16 years agoRMR
Anyone who is willing to write that kind of well thought and reasoned reply is going to move up my list of favorite authors in a hurry!!!.
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I too really do appreciate the "conversation" and I will gladly wait and see where this story goes.
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My pet peeve is the occurrence of conflict or some issue that the author brillantly develops and goes on and on about for some time... but then in order to get to a predetermined ending... be it divorce
revenge or reconciliation... does NOT resolve the issue.
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoGreat story. I was able to identify with the emotions of both characters, and I feel like it may give me a little insight into my own marriage.
RMRedfallalmost 16 years agoAuthor<h5>@Harry</h5>
<p>Cutting straight to the heart of your question:<br /><br />
<b><i style="color:#000088;">HUH? what? what is this about in part 7....<br /><br />
<span style="color:#006800;">"That must have been one hot dream," he said quietly.<br /><br />
"It was an awful dream," she answered. "But I can't help what I dream about, and at least we got something good out of it."<br /><br /></span>
are you telling us ... that the wife tells Nick "dear I hot dream but I wont tell you whats it about?"</i></b><br /><br />
That is, in fact, the point. By the time this statement is made, the sex(ual act) is over - therefore this would not have been able to prevent the erotic scene from taking place.</p>
<p>But you bring to light a valid literary point here, and I would like to address it because in so doing, we can actually turn this around and make it a helpful discussion full of suggestions and advice, which is what I have been hoping for from the beginning, rather than the "pissing match" another reader has so aptly pointed out, which accomplishes little and makes the both of us seem petty in the process.</p>
<p>The fact that this entire story is centered around a dream about another man is <b>the point</b>. <b>THE POINT.</b> All of the ire you express toward Maddy is a very human reaction, and may, in the future, turn out to be Nick's reaction, as well. I have a philosophy about writing this kind of story, and it entails, among other things, a refusal to write about the typical, cheating, "desperate housewife". There's enough of that here already. I would rather make an attempt to discuss matters such as the complicated beast of jealousy and the death of passion in a marriage in a morally responsible way - for no other reason than that's simply how I feel it should be examined. I chose the relatively safe scenario of a woman's dream because I can thus open up the subject of jealousy in a realistic way, but still move forward preserving Maddy's integrity as a good wife who is simply not very sexual. I never have to utter a single word about Maddy actually wanting to cheat.</p>
<p>Call me naive, but I had a vision of using this site, and this comment board, to dialogue with readers who could point out flaws in my thinking, make suggestions for the future, and just basically let me know what I've done right or wrong. I have no fear of well-constructed criticisms - sometimes they're more helpful than the most flowery compliments. I won't be deleting any comments from this board unless they violate Literotica's rules. I look forward to stretching this comment board out as long as the story itself, if people have enough to say about it. I'm not here for money or glory (though both are nice), I'm here to learn and discuss. To me, the comment board is more significant than the story. I simply needed the story to open the comment board. Any readers who aren't interested in that need not participate. Any who are, let me know what you're thinking. But remember, in the same spirit that I must accept even the harshest criticisms from readers, I will, when I find it necessary, respond to readers without holding back my own thoughts. On a site like Literotica, I think we can all agree upon the freedom of speech, no?</p>
