All Comments on 'The Stuff of Life'

by Eric_43

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Please.....finish this hot tale!!!

Excellent beginning, got me all hot & bothered, & then it just ends. Quick, part two please, I hate cliffhangers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Good but...

I like the story, I love the direction and confession, But as a person sober for 14 years the drink you took gets to me. I would like to read more though

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Yes

Everything yes. More! The anticipation is so hot. I also enjoyed the candid truth, very organic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nice build up

I liked this a lot. You didn't feel the need to hurry things along or throw in explicit details - it proceeded naturally at its own pace building up to part two. As a previous commenter said, makes you want to read the next bit!

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