by Eric_43
Excellent beginning, got me all hot & bothered, & then it just ends. Quick, part two please, I hate cliffhangers.
I like the story, I love the direction and confession, But as a person sober for 14 years the drink you took gets to me. I would like to read more though
Everything yes. More! The anticipation is so hot. I also enjoyed the candid truth, very organic.
I liked this a lot. You didn't feel the need to hurry things along or throw in explicit details - it proceeded naturally at its own pace building up to part two. As a previous commenter said, makes you want to read the next bit!