All Comments on 'The Succubae Seduction Bk. 02: The Twins Ch. 12'

Its been way to obvious that's what was going on, sorry man this one has rather disappointed me

Also, to mayn rhetorical questions floating around for these smart people to ask them, it snot needed

JC

@JC

Normally your sharp criticisms are on point, but this time you missed the mark a little bit. Yes, the readers already knew who Jessica's mother was, but that's because they're seeing things from the outside. This reveal wasn't for the readers, but for the characters. There are other twists to come, for the readers [have you been to the blog?].

Anyway, thanks for continuing to comment. I look forward to your posts.

So lydan is jessica father or ?

I love this storytelling you have going please keep it up!

Sheldon? Or Eldon?

@SensitiveHands: Both. Eldon is short for Sheldon.