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thalt992000thalt992000almost 8 years ago
Not your best

The story in the beginning of the chapter was sound but the second half kinda felt weak you took 3strong characters it this chapter and made the weak .their is a saying love conquers all. His love for Gloria should have broke her control because of wanting her happiness over his.

phoenix23ninjaphoenix23ninjaalmost 8 years ago
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When is the next chapter??

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