All Comments on 'The Succubae Seduction Bk. 02: The Twins Ch. 17'

I'm so glad I'm starting to see some new stories again. Keep up the great work!

A long story with a great plot, character development and many twists to keep it extremely enjoyable and fun to read. Please keep up the great work. I can't wait to read the continuing story.

i've been reading this since the start , amazing . oh can't wait to read more.

Really enjoyed book 1, and book 2 has been great as well. Excited to find out what Angela took from Lyden.

Lyden is about to tell the 'kids' something, and Sonia blurts out he's not seen Angela as much lately, revealing the US govt is keeping track of him closely.

He responds with 'do they watch my caloric content and how much I piss, as well?'

With Lyden's personal aversion cussing, he would not have said, 'piss'. He has cursed, in the past, when extremely angry, but this was not such a situation.

GeoD

Forgive that lapse in writing. To me, the word 'piss' is not a swear word. It's not even dirty. This must be a cultural thing.