All Comments on 'The Succubae Seduction Ch. 12'

Keep up the good work, I'm loving your story.

I recall that he felt uncomfortible at the picnic. That combined with the fact that he thinks he heard the voice before leads be to believe that Chilton is the same person they are meeting with here. It is logical and is most likly going to be used, seeing that it makes a wonderful plot twist.

Man, you have made Lyden such a whiny ass bitch and acting like semi-retard all the time.

So far I have really like Lyden. He reacts like a normal person would. He shows that he is not a coward by facing the things he is most afraid of and doing things he knows can get him in trouble but does it anyway for his sense of right and wrong. I found I really liked Arethusa

How did Lyden know that the fairy didn't deserve to be stuck to that orb?

How did Lyden know that the fairy wasn't evil?

......Why would he waste the trust of someone helping him save his friend by disobeying him by trying to "save" someone he knows nothing about....

lyden is a fucking idiot. period.

So lyden is powerful enough to have other powerful being want to assassinate him but still too weak to be compelled or fight... The storyline is good but his constant whining and cowering is beginning to (as another user put it) infuriate me..

*still weak enough to be compelled *