All Comments on 'The Succubae Seduction Ch. 18-19'

5 stars

I really hope all the characters didn't get killed off in the real world!

your the fucking bomb you really should make this an actual book i could see this being one of those awesomely crazy movies greeces last stand with lynden snow. just a thought though you tell it perfectly. cant wait for 20 keep kicking ass.

Every character I've seen so far has matched with another but who the hell is Thomas

He is one of Lyden's coworkers.

Dude, is there gonna be even one chapter where Lyden doesn't fucking pass out?

Seriously love this chapter, not only because of the swordsmanship (being a master at arms myself) but because its so well written. I love how cleverly you introduce each person and an inner part of themselves before the next chapter, Areth needs more action though, feisty fairy needs some love too.

JC

The only part I did not like is that he did not realize what Aerith feels for him even a little, seems sad.

After the first seventeen chapters these two were a let down. I felt we were dragged away from the story on a pointless side trip. I certainly didn't want to see Marchosias "win" and I didn't want to see the pixie lose her soul either.

interesting gimmick

What a whiner below . You don't like or want any diversity ? To build and add to and lengthen a good story ? This story is vastly covering a lot of 2 worlds .

You are one boring reader . You probably shouldn't read anymore . They may take a wrong turn on the wrong path . Just to piss you off .

Ha. And first of all Areth did not even come close to giving him any clues . So it isn't sad that he doesn't know she suddenly fipped flavors for him . He is being pulled in about 12 directions . And surviving and figuring it out .