All Comments on 'The Succubae Seduction Ch. 23'

by DBs_Bro

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JadephireJadephireover 10 years ago
Wonderful

Great story telling I can not wait to read more.

demon_Xdemon_Xover 10 years ago
awesome

yeah its your high time

dewmindsdewmindsover 10 years ago
Awesome

Love it and I like the way your running the chapter longer makes it flow better when it doesn't cut off at odd points

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Awesome

I've loved every one of these!!!! Keep up the great work!!! <3

WretchedMonkeyWretchedMonkeyabout 1 year ago

I have one issue with "...Crooking the two invading digits, I rub hard across the top wall of her uterus, until she explodes in a loud orgasm..." Now he'd have to have some pretty long fingers and be invading pretty aggressively to be rubbing anyone's uterus as it's protected by the cervix, beyond the end of the Vagina.

I'm enjoying the series though and I'm glad I found it.

DBs_BroDBs_Broabout 1 year agoAuthor

That's a good catch! Yeah, that definitely wouldn't work.

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