All Comments on 'The Suitcase Ch. 01'

Great start. I can't wait to see what happens. More please!

Any chance you're working on a followup?

Great start - love the detail and description.....eagerly anticipating part 2

Should be here tomorrow. Keep reading!

I have just started reading. I have just gotten to the contents of the suitcase, I am as hard as a rock, I am sitting here with a picture of my favorite fantasy trap wishing I were looking into a mirror. I hope you tell a story that I come back to often and please don't leave me wanting a finish. No pressure!

He remained seated and just stared at his Boss. The rest was both implausible and unbelievable.

2:2 in English, hates reading books...

I'd so love a boss like that--

Jane London ontario