All Comments on 'The Sultanah Ch. 11'

In an attempt to be clever or witty you got lost in the words. Inane actions and silly dialogue weigh the story down in the muck. You do have 1500-1600 loyal readers. The rest of us got bored about chapter 2.

It's good work.. I really like this series. There's a perfect balance between the story and the sex. Keep it up

The only reason I wasn't fond of this chapter was the lack of sex with Nislani, maybe the next chapter.

I find myself waiting for the next chapter and devouring it!

Love this chapter. Your writing is amazing, and the sex very titillating, but goodness, the plot is what I find truly awesome.

I wonder why there's this one guy hounding your chapter and giving you negative comments. So weird that he'd read chapter after chapter simply to "criticise".

I enjoy the freedom with which these characters explore their sexuality, even as they struggle against doubt and prejudice. I envy their ability to move from doubt to such freedom of expression. Lovely.

I'm glad Varis finally decided to experience her female pleasure center. Having other women with cocks enables them all to be much freer in their pursuit of sexual pleasure.

Blue Eyes