All Comments on 'The Summer Banking Intern'

THERE IS NO STORY , ONLY A TITLE ! !

DOH ! !

Could use a little fleshing out though. More about the bank, and about the intern and how the summer went would help it. Otherwise, I like the premise.

A masterpiece of postmodern erotica.

Holy shit that was epic. Wow dude thanks for another epic story. I think I have read the best fucking one yet! More please...oh wait there was nothing here....meh just as well.

I guess you meant for this to be funny......it's not.

It's still quite a bit better than many others.

Infantile, stupid political bullshit. No redeeming social value; the truest form of pornography.

it might be good if it is true

The story was appproved, however it was not added correctly to the site.

AWESOME! I see five stars being rated for this story LMAO!

Do you plan to post?

Completely unerotic. Learn to write.

Your story up to the interview was superb: well written, plausible,with well developed characters.

For me the sex scenes were way over the top. They were too long and the constant harping on the size of the cock, the deep throating, and the volume of fluid expended was simply too much. In some case less is more. This is one of those cases.

However, I like your writing style and your descriptions are very good. Hunker down and put the sex in the realm of possibility. You show and don't tell, so you're on the right track.

Please ignore most of those who have commented on your story, because their comments reflect a lack of critical thinking.

wow , i loved it oh to be so wonderful to be fucked like that, waiting for more , i cum as much as she did lol

I don't know if I'd rather be the wife or mistress. It seems they both got it good.