All Comments on 'The Summoning'

by GoldenCojones

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CarnaleyeCarnaleyeover 8 years ago
Amazing

Surely one of the best group sex story written. Smashing ! Deserves the five stars

mambrkemambrkeover 8 years ago
The best

What a great fun it was to read this story. Can only hope you will writte part 2 of it and / or a prologue. It would be great to read about Alice and Jack and their life before this summoning as well as to know what is happening with the coven after that.

Please continue writting, for you really are talented and with that you bring us a lot of joy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A Chicago Temple

Ordun Chicago Sabaean Religious Order

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
full on

well that certainly makes up for lack of sex in other entries this year! i was actually well intrigued by the witchcraft side of it but generally liked the whole story. good luck, sopharoones

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Too Bad!

that contest rules do not allow more than five stars or this would have been at least a SIX.

Great story. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Part Deaux

I would like to see the next chapter include a fight with Jack and Adam settling things for good. Plus some amazing sex and a compelling story as always!

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