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All Comments on 'The Sun, The Girl and Goodbye Ch. 02'

by TheGreyKnight

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parawaparawaabout 9 years ago
Good

Lovely exotic setting, simple, strong actors and action. Nice to get something so different. You have a good story and attractive characters, just annoying typos and suchlike. Please find a proofreader and use them.

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