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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Fantastic Narrative!

Great story! Excellent detail. Keep em coming!

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 14 years ago
Lit, That was so well done.

Gee, It started off as a story that hard and fast. I was ready to give up[you know I Hate those]. Then it turned in a story I was so glad I stuck around for. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well done, well written . . .

You did a good job of bringing a reality to the sex, a tenderness, a believable love. Keep up the good work.

DazzyDDazzyDabout 2 months ago

WOW! Hope his back heals in time….

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