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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 14 years ago
Good very good

Damn great concept. And you cant go wrong with two hot girls.

marklionmarklionover 14 years ago
Another Great Chapter!!!!

You wrote another great chapter in the series. I like how you are developing different characters in the series. I wonder if you can write another story about any of these characters in the future? I would like to see more of each character and how they developed with each other.

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