All Comments on 'The Surprise'

by southerenboy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Very nicely done

From disappointment to elation in minutes. That's a good way to build tension and release emotions.

Very well written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Awesome....

That was awesome.... Very we written!!

WTG Southernboy.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
"wishing i was that woman-very hot babe..penny

Wow-Makes you feel like your missing out on something-Passion passion babe you are full of it=Wonderful story...penny xoxox

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
HOT!!!!

Love the story,very well writeen and very HOT!! hope you'll write some more

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