All Comments on 'The Surprise'

Just the story about a loving married couple. This couple knows how to please each other. Loving wives should be about just that.. and this story fits perfectly. Very glad no story about sharing, cheating or trying to hide your cheating and lies from your partner/spouse. None of that fits into a "Loving Wives" or "Spouse" Well done 5 stars

And a dialogue coach. At least there wasn't a cuckold to be seen anywhere in this.

still running his mouth and crying about women getting what men have been doing for 100years

Its being pedantic but the 'Loving Wives' category is supposed to be about extra-marital fun.

Just lovely!

I agree with the 5 star comment, it is good to see stories about a loving couple enjoying each other . This is what a loving wife category should be like with other areas for cheating, swapping, cucks, etc. There should be something for all to enjoy but I like to read a story like this because there are a lot of happy couples out there like this who might enjoy reading a story where they are happily married and having fun together.

Nice description, lots of dialog, but not much of a plot. Emotions are filtered by dialog, so that's missing too.

Dialog only is tough to carry out

A lot of fun. Something I could easily see a hot young wife doing for her loving husband. Short & sweet. I loved it. A definite 5.

Cute. Imaginative. Humorous

...but good !!

After I stopped laffin - only gave it Five Stars...

No cheating, no drama, no lies, just good sex between husband and wife!

I enjoyed that.