All Comments on 'The Surprise Ch. 01'

I look forward to reading much more. Thank you for sharing your writing with us - if it had a fault in my eyes, there was just too little of it! There is, I am sure, a lot more to tell - and I am eager to read it all! Five stars.

This is the kind of woman I need.

Great story. A simple scene showing dominance at its best. Keep them coming, MsJMarie. Can't wait for the next one. Five stars.

A femdom spirited female is always a rush to read. I'll be waiting...

A great story!

maybe misstress could make his cock larger surgically or just stretch it!!!!!!!!!!