All Comments on 'The Sweet Smell of Success'

by Brandy Chase

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  • 11 Comments
rgraham666rgraham666over 18 years ago
Sweet

sexy, sad, erotic and romantic.

A very good story.

I loved the dialog between the characters.

Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wonderful, sexy story

To me this was one of the sexiest, most erotic little stories that I have ever read. And besides that, the characters and dialogue are so realistic and ALIVE, especially during the sex scenes. Powerful stuff!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
so good

Awesome as usual, I got 2 stories left and I've read all of your stories, I'm so sad that you haven't posted in I think 3 years. Thanks for the amazing stories though, hope someday in the future you decide to grace us with a few more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Whass'er name?

Was a total dork. She also yelled alot. haha.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
OH GAWD!!!

I LOVED THIS WONDERFUL WORK. MAY WE HAVE MORE?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Please post you old stuff back up here!

Great story! Keep then coming!

fingers46fingers46almost 12 years ago
Excellent,enjoyed greatly

Very nice story quite explicit without being exploititive (is that a word)?

To repeat enjoyed greatly thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Gorgeous

Sensuous, sexy, literate and emotionally powerful. Loved every moment!

dgowredgowreabout 11 years ago

Not only a skilled writer but imbued with a wonderful sense of humour, without which love is only a shadow of what it can be. You obviously understand this. Magnifique! More!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice and romantic

Please stop the James Cagney accents! The story is beautiful and if you wanted light-hearted baner you could use a different device. Just please go with the themes you are goo at.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 2 years ago

You're are gifted with a beautiful talent , writing and your style is filled with tenderness heart&soul touching ...... Wonderful fabulous story

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