All Comments on 'The Switch Up Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
This might indeed be fun

I like this one, straight to the point, fun, kinda sweet and raunchy all at the same time. Do continue soon!

5*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great concept

I'd enjoy reading how it develops.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

this would be cool to actually get to switch. Please continue this series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
fun

Fun story, please write more, but please study English grammar or get someone to edit for you....

RaccoonWankerRaccoonWankeralmost 8 years ago
this is gonna be a fun one

please continue I'll be looking forward to what happens next

LeFrog08LeFrog08over 7 years ago
Interesting.

I can't wait to see how they both

adapt & cope with their sib's body.

And acting normal in society...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO,this cliff hanger is cruel but enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
mooooore!!!!!

can I give u more than 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I would if I could!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Damn good

Loved it. Picked out a few spelling mistakes here and there (I'm just one of those people that can't help but notice), but not enough to take away from the story.

I'm dying to read the rest, it was a great plot and well written :) is there more somewhere??

Bill669JBill669Jover 1 year ago

Very good concept Lots of possibilities I really want to see how this develops. If your writing is as good in this story it should be hot. I look forward to their future adventures lol a whole new realm of sex ed

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