All Comments on 'The Symbiote Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
An abrupt turn

A very intriguing story. Somewhat confusing but after rereading some of it the storyline made sense. However it's almost like a chapter was missing. The whole Elise thing was a huge plot change and introduced Zena, but it seems the relationship between Nathan and Zena was skipped. All we know is that they are competitive.

How did Nathan deal with Elise's revelation? How did he deal with the people he knew previously? Turning the world into slaves? And he is OK with that?

It seems Nathan she'd all or almost all of his likable qualities in this chapter. Hopefully that's not permanent. Definitely continue the story! I'm interested in how this one ends.

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