All Comments on 'The T-Ball Coach'

by thomasbatt069

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Coaching

In a trailer park can be fun, sorry about giving you the clap.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
I enjoyed it . . .

But, why leave us in the dark as to which one was the winner, runner-up, etc.? Frankly, the descriptions warranted a tie for all four, and they all should have taken turns mounting him. I voted you a "five" but not sure you really deserved it.

mortismortisalmost 14 years ago
I like the theme

As a former Soccer Coach I got to see plenty of MILF every game as well. Never put it into fantasy. Nice idea.

Time for season 2.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Great story line idea

That was a great way to handle a MILF soccer mom scenario .. very well done .... i agree that you could expand it further into a discrete mini series of having the mantal to continue to provide pleasure to each one of the beauties individually or in combination ... the "Coach's Club" that has very specific membership requirements

xtorchxtorchalmost 14 years ago
Nicely orchestrated

That contest was a clever idea. Could have drawn out the climax a bit though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Intrigueing!

I thought your ending was great. Leaving us hanging that way left it wide open for a sequel that I hope you give us soon. Jerry

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

hope there is more. as a coach i wish that could happen but allas this is fiction!!!!!!!

conan19711conan19711over 13 years ago

Great story, i wish I also had such an experiance as an Coach ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Who was the winner. Besides the coach ???

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Oh my god... I hate you, I hate you, I hate you...

That was so good but so unfair... clearly he'd be only too happy to be involved with more than just one of them.

No way he can't feel like it's dishonest to consider her a final winner - obviously, there should be rematchs with variations...

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