by thomasbatt069
But, why leave us in the dark as to which one was the winner, runner-up, etc.? Frankly, the descriptions warranted a tie for all four, and they all should have taken turns mounting him. I voted you a "five" but not sure you really deserved it.
As a former Soccer Coach I got to see plenty of MILF every game as well. Never put it into fantasy. Nice idea.
Time for season 2.
That was a great way to handle a MILF soccer mom scenario .. very well done .... i agree that you could expand it further into a discrete mini series of having the mantal to continue to provide pleasure to each one of the beauties individually or in combination ... the "Coach's Club" that has very specific membership requirements
That contest was a clever idea. Could have drawn out the climax a bit though.
I thought your ending was great. Leaving us hanging that way left it wide open for a sequel that I hope you give us soon. Jerry
hope there is more. as a coach i wish that could happen but allas this is fiction!!!!!!!
That was so good but so unfair... clearly he'd be only too happy to be involved with more than just one of them.
No way he can't feel like it's dishonest to consider her a final winner - obviously, there should be rematchs with variations...