All Comments on 'The Tackiest City on Earth Ch. 01'

You promised us quite a lot at the start of this story and, as far as I can tell, you have delivered. Having help from FA_JF must have been a great help - you are lucky to have such a well-informed assistant, whatever her role.

Please continue - and if five stars will help you decide whether to or not, they are yours. Thank you.

I really enjoyed this. I don't leave a lot of comments, but I wanted to say I'm totally on board here. What a great ride.

It felt very very real to me. And I'm a sucker for realism, so it worked awesome for me. Well done! I'd love to read some more from you about these two :)

The title put me off TBH, but seeing the comments I gave it a read. Glad that I did

Well worth continuing, so please do

This has to be one of the most realistic story I've seen here....made me feel squirmy/happy and hot all at the same time. First time I've been moved to leave a comment for a story. Do continue, please!

Whoop! Whoop!

Nicely done magicsplash. However, the heat is on. You have TWO hungry audiences wanting more. ;D. Your MAD fans will come for you with torches and pitchforks if you abandon them... ;D

Friends becoming more is such an interesting dynamic. There is such greater depth to be had-joys and complications-than strangers meeting from the net.

Bring us more.

Loved it! You have a wonderful gift for storytelling, and now have shown you can cross genres, too. I'm looking forward to a lot more of this story. (But please don't abandon Maidens and Drakels ....it's one of my all-time favorites!)

What a nice little story. Thank you. Maybe a 4 but I gave you a 5.

Nice. Next chapter pls.

Hot damn! Your place or mine?