All Comments on 'The Taking'

Take me. Take me.

Jesus, not only incredibly hot, but well written too. No cliches, no boring stuff we've all read and heard before. A real voice....

Your ability to describe your feelings is nothing short of incredible...I love a top who can express what he feels and what he enjoys ^_^

Your ability to describe your feelings is nothing short of incredible...I love a top who can express what he feels and what he enjoys ^_^

I got hard and I hate that happening when I'm reading about guy sex. Wish I was the one getting it.

Geezus,that was fantastic,really well written.

realli hot. u have a knack for writing. keep on.

Absolutely perfect. Bravo!

So well written. This was exactly how I felt felt I lost my cherry, and the way your protagonist writes is exactly how I hoped my top was feeling. I wish I was the bottom in this tale. Great story

You have captured a moment that I have experienced only once in my life, but dream of experiencing at least once more. Well done!

Really got aroused reading your story. Enjoyed the patience and care the top took to make sure it was nice for the bottom.

Very strong. I certainly got turned thinking about you taking me like that...I hope your partner enjoyed it half as much as I did.

or was it all about you?

Hey Anonymous, who cares? I just like popping them. If they don't enjoy it, too bad. Next!

Though not my first time I was worried about the size of my new partner but after similar foreplay Frank told me he was going to fuck me before I left, and I honestly believe you have described his feelings.

I gave my account in a story on this site titled Frank man of iron, this became a very long lasting affair.

Very well written, and a joy to read, and understand the other side, Cheers N

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This is the first time I have rated a story 5 stars. Enough said! You would make a wonderful partner!

I have read this several times, and it never fails to excite me more than anything I've ever read on this, or any other, site! To be taken this way would be a bottom's dream. It certainly is mine. I hopt to see more from this author-and will continue dreaming of being taken this way!!!

God this story made me so fuckin horny!!! I couldn`t help but to get out my big dildo and slide in deep inside my wanting fuckhole!! Reading the story and fantasizing you were really fucking my hole with your cock! I shot what seemed a gallon of cum with my dildo reaching the deepest part of my hole, driving me crazy with lust!! I freakin LOVE this story!!!!!!!

Just how I need to be taken

That was so erotically amazing.