All Comments on 'The Taking Pt. 01'

In your first few paragraphs you describe two characters but don’t state their names until later. The reader has to figure out which is which when the names are provided. Why? Mandy’s the friend and Laura’s the girlfriend. Or was...

Five foot tall and only 85 pounds? Really? She would be so skinny and bony that I would bring her a BigMac instead of my stiff rod.

I haven't even read this story, only saw the first few lines but saved it for later reading. The comment on dimensions caught my eyes, though. It is always a fascinating subject, how we picture weight to height proportions on a woman. I will have to go back to check on my memory but , was not porn star Jessi Palmer listed as 4.11 and 85 pounds? She seem to have a slender but well proportioned body, not really a starving or skinny body that look too unhealthy. Interesting subject, at least for me.

Enjoy your stories, my fellow readers!

I'd LOVE to have a girlfriend/prostitute like this! Sounds like a perfect dream!