All Comments on 'The Tale of Benjamin Royson'

by Sean Renaud

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Good Start

That was a great beginning but you need to continue the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
think there

that was a nice start would love to hear more about it.... thinks it would be nice to hear more about what has happened with the father and daughter that all was just a tease lol need more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
More

Go on, don't stop the story here =). You just have to write more about these two..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Great Story!

That was definetly one of the best! Great job! Keep it up! ;)

Marklynda2Marklynda212 months ago

Sad when the child has to school the parent. A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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