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All Comments on 'The Talker'

by ReaperOfGrey

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 10 years ago
Nice first story

I would have liked a longer tale but thank you for writing and taking the publishing plunge - it SHOULD be easier from here on in. Please keep writing - it is the only way to improve. Four stars and welcome to Literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
well done

always better to leave us wanting more - and yes, I was sad when it ended. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Too quick. No build-up. Not erotic. Waste of time

rdoolittlerdoolittleabout 10 years ago
Aborted takeoff

You started strong... We need more female doms on this site, so please don't be discouraged.

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