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All Comments on 'The Talons of a Dark Heart Ch. 02'

by TalyisBagley

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
a good start

It's an interesting story. Can't wait to read more :)

bad_girl69bad_girl69almost 15 years ago
great

I have really like these 2 chapters so far. Please continue. I really would like to know what happens next. I hope she isnt done with her fiesty personality, lol. Great job so far.

SecretFantasy69SecretFantasy69almost 15 years ago
An absolute Gem!

I'm so excited that I happened across this story! I've only read 2 chapters, but I am already entranced. So far, Novak seems very...cruel to Tay but good to his men so I'm guessing he isn't a crazy bastard. lol. I am interested in knowing why he holds her in such revulsion. Onto the next chapter.

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