All Comments on 'The Talons of a Dark Heart Ch. 03'
by TalyisBagley
- 7 Comments
PennLadyalmost 15 years agoThe impending events make me uncomfortable, but I guess that means you're doing a good job of writing.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoWow you did it once again I am hoping that Novak has a change of heart and doesn't allow the others to rape her..this is a very touching story if only I could purchase online to add to my book collection..I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter..please keep up the good work..your writing could rival my favorite writer
Sherrilyn Kenyon !!
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoWow you did it once again I am hoping that Novak has a change of heart and doesn't allow the others to rape her..this is a very touching story if only I could purchase online to add to my book collection..I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter..please keep up the good work..your writing could rival my favorite writer
Sherrilyn Kenyon !!
Tricialenalmost 15 years agoVery well written....I want to know what happens next...and I'm hoping that Novack doesn't end up being mean enough to give Taylis to his men...I won't like him very much if he does...I like Gareth...a lot...so maybe if Novack turns out to be a bastard...Gareth will save her...
Anonymousover 13 years agoNo words are enough to describe how disgusted I feel for the incoming gang rape. If he really loved her at one point he wouldn't do that to her now. Yeah she teased him a bit but that doesn't call for rape. She didnt kill his family and she qasnt resonsible for what happened to him in life she was very young. Very disapponted in Gareth for not doing anything about the rape situation considering he has someone he's in love with you would think it would make him compassionate. Especially after what she told him about loving the boy who was obviously Novak. Leaves me coompletely baffled. Great writing though I'm just never fond of dark things and thoughts lol. Anxious to find out what is going to happen on to the next one.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoNormally I'm not into this type of story, but i have to say that i LOVE this story. I adore your expolsive characters and think that you brought they're past to life excellenctly. i can not wait to find out what happens next :) wonderfully written. 5 Stars
Anonymousabout 9 years agogood way to end the chapter and what we're anticipating ahead
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