All Comments on 'The Tart Pt. 01'

Just plain awful. Can NOBODY write a decent story anymore?

Well i thought it was sweet. An earnest fantasy about gender bending and young love.

I enjoyed it, very sweet scene. Ignore the asshole below -- I'd like to see what HE'S written.

What I loved about this story is the way the story of the tart slowly unfolded. Hope there is more to come.

Good story, good setting, Great sex.... Ignore the negative moron! You are very creative so go with that and make Ashley all she can be!!!!!

My favourite stories are all about seduction and gradual transformation of the protagonist into who she/he really is destined to be (or realization of who she really is) without a headlong rush, in fact with some reluctance. For stroke stories (which are fine when you want them), I look for them in other categories.

I anticipate that we are going to be treated to a flashback explaining how Ashton became the Tart and when you have completed that, you will resume the thread and explain how the Tart becomes Ashley. I am very much looking forward to that, although I think I might have preferred to start at the beginning, with Ashton, and avoided the need for the flashback. But that can't be changed, so I'll be happy with what you serve us next -- the sooner the better.

One detail on the British setting: a private (i.e. upper class or upper-middle class) all-boys' school is perhaps more likely to play rugby ("rugger") than football. As they used to say, "Football is a sport of gentlemen played by ruffians, rugby a sport of ruffians played by gentlemen." It has the advantage of providing a great deal of groping activity, if you want to include that as an element of titillation.

I liked it a lot! It's an interesting idea. I'm eagerly anticipating further installments in this series. =)

Hope to see more :)

I love all of your trans stories. This one is awesome too, I hope it is continued. However be careful about overextending, don't take on more series than you can handle. Do them one at a time and if one has to wait so be it. Though if you can handle more than one at a time, go for it :D

Really loved this story. The setting perhaps most of all, this odd school and its, ahem, queer traditions. So I'd love to see more of it, maybe meet the other tarts as Ashley explores her journey. And Ashley herself is wonderful and intriguing, you put her inner struggles very well to paper. How she struggles with who she is, what she desires and how she wants herself and her life to look like by the end. Love the romance too, guess I am a sucker for it, hope her and ther ginger end up together after school too.

Again an amazing story, the plot and sex both. Really hope you continue this someday!