All Comments on 'The Taste of Forbidden Fruits'

You really need an editor or learn to proof read your work better.

"a set of conversant positions"

You need to look up "conversant" in a dictionary. It makes no sense here. You probably mean "conventional".

"With just my shorts on she pushed me onto the bed"

She has your shorts on? A classic example of a dangling modifier. Look it up on Wiki.

"someone ripped my trunks of"

Off.

There are others.