All Comments on 'The Tattooist and the Submissive'

Slightly too brief for my taste. I would have liked (or would like) to read more, to watch this develop and to watch her become decorated, as that's one of my "things". Please continue. Although this is your first posting here, it doesn't read like the effort of a novice. Please keep writing.

use her, abuse her make her your complete and utter slave. Mark her with tattoos and pierce her cunt with grommets to hang chains and bells and weights, her clit, nipples and belly button. Leave her face untouched by piercing and tattoos accept for her eyebrows and shadow. Write your ownership of her on the skin between her cunt and asshole and make her wear butt plugs increasing the size each week. use her up, it's what she craves and wants you to do to her.

Yes this is first published story and it will develop further. I didn't want to go too much into detail as I'd like to build on that. The next story that follows will develop along the lines of the above comments. Appreciate the feedback so thank you for the direction suggestions ☺️

Since you're open to suggestions

Can she please stay an actual valued human being? Being a volitionally decorated and modified person is great. Being heavily manipulated into losing your humanity and being treated like dirty is something else. I can see her as a body mod goddess who likes intense sex. Let him both enjoy and appreciate that. Don't make him a scummy userabuser.

Loved it!

Looking forward to reading your future submissions!

Very immense actually got my juices flowing 😝